Kiss In The Rain

Wow. I thinks that's all I can say. Thank you for being vague in this prologue; as Springrain said, prologues are supposed to be vague, but for some reason most ...

This was really kind of sad, but it was beautifully written :). Your imagery is spectacular! Keep it going!

Hiya, I found this really captivating. The vagueness of it made it really intriguing. However, I agrea with happybear, that it was too short. I understand that prologues are supposed ...

Well, It sounds interesting, to say the least. It is captivating, but I agree with Hannah. It goes a little fast. But, maybe that's your style. I'll look out for ...

Chapter 4 I leaned out the door of my car as my body heaved and pulsed with painful convulsions. My stomach felt as if it had been wrung out, but ...

Echolair, lol, this is just the prologue. I meant it to be vague. It's not supposed to make sense right away. Thanks for the reviews

:D This was funny. Quite ironic for Fatty to fall in love with a girl over a fart, no? But it is possible, I suppose. People fall in love for ...

Chapter 3 The rain poured in buckets upon her windshield as Stephanie sat in the driveway. Her temper was boiling beneath the surface, and she wanted to have it under ...

Hello. I'm Kiss In The Rain, and this has gotten off to a great start! :). Lets start with the grammar: A wave of relief swept over him when he ...

Beautiful, J, beautiful. I truly loved the perspective, and there were only a few grammatical mistakes (:) but you know that, don't you? lol). I would have been surprised if ...

Awwwwwwwwww!!! This was really cute! You did a really good job capturing the moment. :D. Really there was only one thing: you have to put breaks between point of views. ...

I must say, I disagree with BM. It doesn't really seem all that cliche. I mean, of course there is the "I'LL GET REVENGE!" thing going on, but you do ...

Hey, BigBadBear. This is quite the piece. :D I really liked it! Ryukun pretty much got the grammar, so I'll just add to the compliments. I liked it, really I ...

Hey! How goes it? Hmm, I think every one got the editing done... so I'm just going to tell you that I really liked it! :D. It's interesting, and I ...

Hey there, Spiffygirl. I think you have something really good going here. I like the idea, it is very original. You have a wonderful vocabulary for one so young, (haha, ...